Path to self-destruction

By Frater Synth

Thoughts,
lay in wait

As the words of another,
Weaken barricaded memories

Collapsing,
under the weight of fear

Wandering aimlessly,
along the darkened path that lay ahead

Welled up tears,
fall to the earth

Invisible,
to all but one.

Turning to look back,
threw the tangled wood

Returning to look forward to opportunity,
only to find failure

  


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Copyright 2011 Frater Synth
Published on Thursday, October 27, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: great work, you express suicidal thoughts and attempts very well-Mrk

  • Nixx On Monday, December 12, 2011, Nixx (240)By person wrote:

    familiar feeling

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274)By person wrote:

    The path to self destruction, excellent write.

  • sTr8-jAcKeT On Friday, October 28, 2011, sTr8-jAcKeT (735)By person wrote:

    For such few words; a thousand images. Nicely done my friend. I don't write in free-style, so I can not really offer any advice as you requested in your profile my friend. Just speak from the heart and let the brain censor the words & filter the ones you don't like. That's about it, keep up the good work though.

  • MoonLitShadowz On Thursday, October 27, 2011, MoonLitShadowz (18)By person wrote:

    You are so good at painting pictures with your words. I love you and am here for you always. You are my Syn eternally.

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