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-Pull Your Hair-
By sTr8-jAcKeT
A wisp of air,
On lips so bare,
I felt the grip of lust.
Eyes still teaming,
Ferocious screaming,
Positions we
adjust.
With light so dim,
From candle rim,
Hot breath
our only sight.
Panting & sweating,
Gripping & wetting,
Flesh now pressed so tight.
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Copyright 2011 sTr8-jAcKeT
Author's Note:
This was a short done thinking of the great, primal pleasure of life; but making you want more.Comments on "-Pull Your Hair-"
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On Saturday, August 17, 2019, sadistic intent hex
(210)
wrote:
I Love erotic poetry it really paints the primitive side sex can come too. I to wish it was longer lol.
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On Sunday, October 6, 2019, sTr8-jAcKeT
(735) wrote:
Hah, thanks. I felt its short length reminded me of being in a dark cabin, stranded in the middle of a winter mountain. Somehow it seems to help solidify in my mind at least.
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On Sunday, March 24, 2019, 10 Forty Three
(593) wrote:
I kind of wish this one was longer so I could get longer lol. It was quite sensual and hot. W/d - 10
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On Sunday, March 24, 2019, sTr8-jAcKeT
(735) wrote:
Haha, I fucking lost it on that remark! That was great.
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On Thursday, December 6, 2018, Samael Crowe
(174) wrote:
I always enjoy such brilliantly written erotic poetry. Very vivid imagery;)
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On Thursday, December 6, 2018, sTr8-jAcKeT
(735) wrote:
Kudos, I felt it didn't have enough imagery. Thanks though.
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A former member wrote:
Yummy, me likes. Pull my hair!!!
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On Monday, February 6, 2012, Ladyhawke
(394) wrote:
Damn, you are addictive!!! This piece, while I am quite aware of the sexual part, find myself wandering.... Dare I say I see more to this than just sexual pleasure? I think I do......
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A former member wrote:
Great use of words. Definitly Hot!!
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On Friday, January 6, 2012, sTr8-jAcKeT
(735) wrote:
Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
Pretty hot.
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On Thursday, October 27, 2011, sTr8-jAcKeT
(735) wrote:
I thought so.
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