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i hate this feeling
By the broken
this feeling you give me
its
interesting at the most
stuck like a plauge
its seems i'm to
be it host
It's
Leavin
me there heart pounding fast
On my knees hoping you
dont just walk past
Vizualizing my children with you
Ending my suicidal tendices
You almost toy with it at times
On occaisions you make
me cry
Understanding
this feeling is something i just cant do
i guess all i really
know is
i must really love you...
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Copyright 2011 joshua lee mccourt
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A former member wrote:
this is a really great piece. it's a representation of what can really happen in society
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A former member wrote:
i love u to honey shnucums!!!!!!
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On Monday, October 31, 2011, Devilish
(2658)
wrote:
The broken... I love ya.. I would like for you to join me in something special... Your writing is beyond worthy... Soon there will be a place to share it with ones like you and I... I'll mail you soon as it gets goin... =)
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On Thursday, October 27, 2011, ColorMeToxic
(240) wrote:
Neat-o. Loved it.
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A former member wrote:
Joshy god damn it this was great!
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On Friday, October 21, 2011, Cant walk away
(30) wrote:
I really like this, confused love, i can relate with alot of my work great write
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On Thursday, October 20, 2011, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Well well... The broken.. I'm impressed.. This is actually beautiful and it has to do with love.. A different concept for me... Lovely!!!
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