A Ballad For...

By Crush_With_Eyeliner

I'd rather
not get
weighed
down with
with theseĀ 
thoughts.

It's no
more than
a simple
gift.

I hate you.

And you
deserve
it.

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Copyright 2011 Crush_With_Eyeliner
Published on Saturday, October 15, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • FindAgentX On Sunday, September 30, 2012, FindAgentX (31)By person wrote:

    i wholeheartedly agree.

  • Feral On Monday, October 17, 2011, Feral (87)By person wrote:

    I am currently right there with you. Interesting how the same story plays out at the same time...

  • A former member wrote: Ah, hatred as a gift. Giving one a reason to turn away from the emotional chains that bind. Hatred does make it easier to leave a former love behind, doesn't it? Partings can't always be amicable. Once again, you quickly bring the point home...Succinct might just be your middle name. Another powerful piece...I am always looking forward to seeing your latest view through the cracks. Brilliant simplicity...I am envious of your ability to pack such a strong feeling in your short ones. ACE, brother!

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