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Depression II
By ColorMeToxic
What a dreary day
a black cloud forms over me
so
begins the rain
~~~
many
weeks later
what a mighty cloud it is
I am soaking wet
~~~
sometimes when it rains
it only rains
a little
and sometimes it stays
~~~
but then
the sun comes
and pushes the cloud away
and I smile once
more
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© 2015 Beth Greene
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On Wednesday, April 18, 2012, grantrizmo2002
(17)
wrote:
Nice work, I can totally relate. I live among those clouds. great piece....
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On Friday, March 2, 2012, darkness falls
(73) wrote:
Seasonal Affective Disorder sucks ass. Believe me, I know.
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A former member wrote:
I love the sun. How it chases the clouds away and brightens and warms the soul.
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On Saturday, November 12, 2011, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
I have a certain affinity for haiku, and something just seems right about its union with rain. It's natural, it's melancholic, sadness just seems beautiful in such a venue, like looking through a prism. Definitely deserves a closer look, thanks for the view.
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On Wednesday, October 12, 2011, haunted
(850) wrote:
beth, you should learn to love the rain because when your depressed no one can see your tears and you blend in perfectly with the mood of the sky. as long as you dont dwell in it and you realize the sun will shine again, you can find happiness in the rain. works for me!very nice!
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