Rape Me

By A Velvet Tongue

Fuck Me
Hard
Deep
Rhythmic

Shackle Me
Bound
Broken
Helpless

Sodomize Me
Painful
Pleasurous
Degrading

Intoxicate Me
Addiction
Poison
Craving

Indulge Me
Slick
Breathless
Orgasmic

Rape Me
Blinded
Feral
Bloodied


-Just Promise Not To Speak-






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Copyright 2003 Beverly L Hernandez
Published on Thursday, July 3, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • flawofthepoet On Thursday, October 3, 2019, flawofthepoet (53)By person wrote:

    Wow. Lots of imagery and feelings in this one.

  • A former member wrote: This pulls me in every direction imaginable.

  • Nixx On Tuesday, February 24, 2009, Nixx (240)By person wrote:

    oh i do miss the fun! :D

  • A former member wrote: thats good but you might wanna be careful im sure quite a few ppl were raped n might be ofended.

  • A former member wrote: like the way you used words and not sentences

  • RubyXero On Saturday, November 10, 2007, RubyXero (484)By person wrote:

    ...always a prequalifier...

  • A former member wrote: *Props*

  • thelostmessenger On Friday, October 19, 2007, thelostmessenger (112)By person wrote:

    oo. yeahhh... -fave- *messenger

  • A former member wrote: i really do like this one, except..i don't get my kicks from getting raped, but otherwise it's all good.

  • A former member wrote: Hot damn. Right on Carlos.

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, November 5, 2006, carlosjackal (3011)By person wrote:

    Such beautiful debauchery. Fuck me raw, fuck me blue, fuck me hard, fuck me true. Write the fuck on..

  • A former member wrote: i like this one alot. ot speaks about things that people are often afraid to talk about. i love it!!! ~Corpse

  • Bluegirl On Sunday, October 1, 2006, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    This was beautifully done. *fav*

  • A former member wrote: *clap* that was fucking great

  • xserratedsoulx On Sunday, February 5, 2006, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    that last line is absolutely chilling. ~lauren~

  • A former member wrote: *grinz* becareful not only what you wish for but...how you wish for it >;) you might find someone that with just fuck your head and heart up and still have a little dick and not good in bed

  • dismal silence On Tuesday, January 3, 2006, dismal silence (14)By person wrote:

    oh damn, just awsome, intense, feeling every word of it

  • Shewolf On Wednesday, December 28, 2005, Shewolf (25)By person wrote:

    I love it,,,chill me, thrill me, fulfill me and then leave me the hell alone.....Shewolf

  • cherietree On Tuesday, November 29, 2005, cherietree (21)By person wrote:

    i think this is amazing

  • A former member wrote: wow thats way deep

  • A former member wrote: remindes me

  • A former member wrote: Amazing

  • A former member wrote: dont worry i dont kiss and tell

  • Serenity On Tuesday, May 24, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    "-Just Promise Not To Speak-" ... Amazing. Great peice :)

  • Black_Cherry_Doll_ On Saturday, May 14, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (69)By person wrote:

    Intense and raw and real. you are incredible!!!!

  • Serenity On Saturday, April 9, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Oh I love this!

  • agentlemenspromise On Tuesday, October 26, 2004, agentlemenspromise (42)By person wrote:

    you make rape sound beautiful

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Thursday, September 2, 2004, CorruptedLittleGirl (253)By person wrote:

    Excellent work. Perfect rhythm and word choice. This is a definite favorite.

  • A former member wrote: You describe it so wonderfully. I sugest you read my poem breaker of the innocent. it might strike a memory.

  • WikidGrrl On Thursday, June 3, 2004, WikidGrrl (26)By person wrote:

    very good...straight to the point and very clear...i love it!

  • Mischevious Princess On Wednesday, May 5, 2004, Mischevious Princess (28)By person wrote:

    talk about blunt....and to the point

  • gracefullytorn On Monday, March 29, 2004, gracefullytorn (61)By person wrote:

    Honest and raw. Straight to the most prominant feelings of rape. Very provocative. Great piece.

  • Dekika On Saturday, March 20, 2004, Dekika (8)By person wrote:

    This is really good, I don't know what else to say.

  • Mistress Morbid On Thursday, March 4, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    I would have to agree, especvially when they say something the shouldnt have. Great work.

  • flying_fox On Monday, January 26, 2004, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    well all I can say is...Velvet, you'd change a good hetero girl like myself any day of the week. This is amazing. And, incidentally, am in total agreement with AlluringDecent. Brilliant. When my membership finally comes through this will be a fave for su

  • flying_fox On Monday, January 26, 2004, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    re. FF

  • A former member wrote: This is sensual and beautiful. I love this. It's nice to see writers who see sex for what it really is, something beautiful, not something to be hushed up and hidden. Great write hun.

  • Tracer On Thursday, January 15, 2004, Tracer (100)By person wrote:

    I agree...descriptive, I liked it...I like poetry that isn't the norm...^vTracerv^ Scholar

  • Delilah On Monday, December 22, 2003, Delilah (113)By person wrote:

    It's like you got into my brain...and found that little bitty corner of it that no one knows about...shhh...don't tell nobody, but mmmm....yup, this was good...~Delilah~

  • Alanarchy On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    The few words you used highlighted the end. Dont speak. I promise I wont say a word.

  • spaniellie On Monday, November 24, 2003, spaniellie (76)By person wrote:

    awsome write, few words but its full of meaning.

  • A former member wrote: And you live.... where? I'm glad you were on tonight, otherwise I would not have found your work. You are now one of my favs.

  • Loserland On Sunday, October 26, 2003, Loserland (113)By person wrote:

    yes the words Kurt should've wrote...what?.. nevermind...(pun intended)...deeply (!) satisfying as always

  • A former member wrote: An appalling end. Good Job.

  • A former member wrote: Not really much of a comment,but...wow..(Promise not to speak...great line)Dusky..xxx... (p.s.,i love that poem in ur profile(take this waltz)its beautiful

  • Drea On Thursday, September 25, 2003, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    i agree with everything in this poem and eveything Alluring Descent said..whats with guys wanting to be all soft and delicate.shit just give it to me.. and like you said.. dont speak.. that ruins everything.. i LOVED THIS.. its goin in my favorites..~Drea

  • A former member wrote: promise not to speak...what a long way toward hidden emotions... really perfect. ***

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