Disgustingly Beautiful
By Alchemist
Happy go lucky
But repulsively
ugly
Like an ecstacy tongue
Licking an insect lollipop
In
a totalitarian sunshine
Thieves of fire
At a sewage plant of desire
Picking from the bones
The meat of a pig
Blood rare
With a side of pine twigs
A pit viper
In a life and
death fight with
A
water moccasin
In a lagoon filled with sludge
And lotuses
All
beauty doomed
To be consumed by locust
Taunts the wildfire
As it engulfs all it encompasses
Cinder and smoke such restful images
When there not burning your memories
War,
one of mans most decadent events
The
click of a chamber in a gun
A
sweet sound to a thug
Indulgence of
a pungent stench that stings the nose
Like the sexy pain of salt in a wound
Deliciously
sour
Medusa's lusty kiss
of stone in gut
Lost
in paradise
With a chunky slut
Fruits and vegetables
Decayed
and then grew to life again
In a rusty and rustic old tub
Five gallon bucket used for grub
Destruction can
be beautiful
But never when its youthful
Distastefully
blissful
Like a school house being bombed
But the kids are on summer leave
So they celebrate not grieve
Author's Note:
Please comment.Comments on "Disgustingly Beautiful"
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A former member wrote:
LOVE! These lines especially "like the sexy pain of salt in a wound, deliciously sour Medusas lusty kiss of stone in gut . Lost in paradise with a chunky slut " now that's class 👌ðŸ»
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On Thursday, May 31, 2012, LOKI
(164) wrote:
This is really clever.Its a rise and fall of emotions.Its Happy sad mad angry even funny.Really liked the chunky sluts line.It made me laugh.I gonna fave this one
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A former member wrote:
Really pretty formatting... Great poem!
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On Sunday, November 6, 2011, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
Beautifully constructed and delivered
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On Wednesday, October 26, 2011, terris crimson
(169) wrote:
I love this piece. I could read it again anda again and not have to fear of burning myself out on it. great job.
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On Tuesday, October 11, 2011, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
I had forgotten how good you were.. Awe yes the level of talent has been missed... I won't mkiss anything else... Mark my words....I'm lovin it!
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On Tuesday, August 9, 2011, dwells
(4285) wrote:
Give me the chunky slut and a side of pine twigs on the schoolhouse floor. Conjures up some unique images to match the title, neat stuff.
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On Tuesday, August 9, 2011, Alchemist
(688) wrote:
lol, thanks