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Fall From Grace
By celestine_moon
I can't pretend that this pain isn't killing me
I drop down on my knees and pray to you, save me
You want so badly to lift me to your level
Take me from my muddy bed, clean me, anoint me
But I can’t be your angel when I’m wrapped in guilt
The pristine image you carved out of me will fade
And all that shall remain will be this sin and me
And I am not worthy of the holy water
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Copyright 2003 celestine_moon
Published on Tuesday, July 1, 2003.
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On Thursday, June 23, 2005, Sin
(1168)
wrote:
...this was amazing...thank you for sharing it
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On Monday, May 9, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Wow! This is just too good
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On Saturday, September 25, 2004, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
Speaking from experience, ppl that feel this way often are worthy. Nice write, though.
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
very nice write I like it too and I think it is great how it is.
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
poignant... piercing... touches the very essence of the want of divinity... lost in the presence and putresence of a world impossible, grace will never descend
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
wow i love this
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
This is truely wonderful so much feeling in so few words I love it .
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, celestine_moon
(46) wrote:
thank you so much. i love you guys! -moon
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, cre
(411) wrote:
I also like it . . . I think this line is incredible: "But I can't be your angel when I'm wrapped in guilt". This expresses alot very concisely . . . great job.
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
wow... i like it too. it's strong as is... good rhythm as well!
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, Wren
(37) wrote:
I like it just the way it is. ~::Wren::~
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, celestine_moon
(46) wrote:
needs work. please help! -moon
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A former member wrote:
noone's worthy of holy water.. or anything holy for that matter... that's why mercy is an amazing thing..
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