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Life and Death
By Aurora_Light
Life
long or short
sweet or bitter
hell or heaven
it's dark to me
it's up to you
to find your place
Death
sweet and peacefull
long and endless
the light in the dark
it's not my time yet
Light
bright and perfect
complet and yet not
why does it always hide the truth?
Dark
black and loving
surrounding my soul
showing to all the truth inside
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Copyright 2003 Amanda L. Mrozinski
Comments on "Life and Death"
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A former member wrote:
It's a great poem! Really well written and hits the soul. Keep up the writing! =)
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A former member wrote:
This is just breathtaking writing.
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On Monday, December 20, 2010, Artanis
(56)
wrote:
good descriptions on all that we live and die for.
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On Thursday, May 26, 2005, smearedXmakeup
(19) wrote:
I like how you show the light hiding the truth, and the dark revealing it. i like it.
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A former member wrote:
...I don't understand how you fit all your thoughts into this site, i have like SHIT for works and all my space iz takin up... i guess shit splatters
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On Monday, August 11, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
Heeeyy! This is nice! Your assessment on light and dark is an eye opener
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Abbyernathie
(61) wrote:
this one is kewl. i really like it. but then again i like all yer stuff...lol
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On Tuesday, August 5, 2003, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
I felt this to be a fun piece of quick summary poems held in each stanza. The only suggestion I have is to see you write this through equal eyes. Point out some good in Life and Light and bad in Death and Dark. Create a balance. Just a little thought :)
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On Tuesday, August 5, 2003, Kittichoo
(37) wrote:
From the comparison from life and death to living... to the comparisson from light and dark to thinking... Beautiful!!!
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On Thursday, July 31, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
Beautifully done, love the themes and message.
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A former member wrote:
God every one of your poems that i have read are great. you are a one of a kind poet
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On Wednesday, July 2, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
I like this. Like crystal perfectly cut to show the flaws in the making. Facts and flaunts….nice one.~DW~
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On Wednesday, July 9, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
I totaly agree with DeathsWhisper.
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, Stranger
(264) wrote:
I got a chill at the end of this one. Thank you. I love it when that happens.
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On Saturday, June 28, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
life and dead..great perception..helped me more..thanks..loved this one 2!
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A former member wrote:
yes nice one aurora i really enjoyed this piece kefka needs to see this
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On Sunday, June 29, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
why does boredom affect my works so?
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On Tuesday, July 8, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
cuz it is your subconcious mind...lol... I like this peace too! (but I like a lot of ur stuff tut tut).
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