the void

By the broken

the endless pit where my heart must dwell
where the broken sit thier own verision of hell

......enough of this rhyme time bullshit that i do
i'd rather tell a story one stuck to me like glue
...crap there it is again just meaningless rhymes.......
i guess i should get back on track at least now i must have your attention
i was going to write a poem but didn't feel it instead my blood poured to paper to write some what of a story but more of a letter .....i'm going to start with some what of a story then end it with my reason for writing this a person i know named well lets say her names vampy for now she thinks she can repair my broken soul that if i write this poetry then i can be saved. i don't understand it!!! why would one set off on such a hopeless tasks a meaningless one i am not worth saving i am gone traped in the void in which i died in i am beyond saving i am not broken but shattered lost in an endless pit of sorrow i am dead but i decided mabey i can look at this through her eyes at me and i did there are some mabey few but at least some who don't think i am just a waste of space so i at least should give them some sort of curstisy and mabey tell them thanks so mr. (knifelikepens) i say thank you for marking me as one of your favorite poets i am sorry i have never read your work always foused on other things to even give you the time so thank you but sorry mrs. (develish1) you comment on almost all of my work yet all i can say is thank you on one of them very rude of me so im sorry and now vampy or as you all know her (broken all over again)  even though you seem to think i can be saved i guess i should at least say thank you for beleiving in me even though its probubly pointless thanks so what i'm trying to say to you all is thank you and you darkpoetry people you too thank you for even clicking on this i know i'm a shitty poet and your probubly bored out your mind but thanks  now my reason for writing this is to express my sincerity to the great poets that even give me the time of day :D and attempt to have a heart

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Copyright 2011 joshua lee mccourt
Published on Monday, July 4, 2011.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • knifelikepens On Monday, July 4, 2011, knifelikepens (55)By person wrote:

    you are welcome and kep on doing what you do I really like your stuff you are a great poet

  • Nameless Pariah On Monday, July 4, 2011, Nameless Pariah (145)By person wrote:

    Shitty poet? I think not! Your poems are words from your heart, your feelings, your emotions. It's something that only you could ever truly understand. They're yours and they belong to you. Don't ever think otherwise.

  • Devilish On Tuesday, July 5, 2011, Devilish (3758)By person wrote:

    Thank you Nameless Pariah... You've been showing up alot lately with enccouraging words and comments... we all apreciate that and by the way you should read blood and orgasms by this poet... i'ts hot as fuck! Scholar

  • Devilish On Monday, July 4, 2011, Devilish (3758)By person wrote:

    How do I comment on this? I saw... the void... the broken... I click! Ofcourse! What ever it is u hav to say is apreciated, your ryhm, rythim, the way you release your demons stir me... I love it! And the reason your one of my favorites is because you have no shame putting it all out there with such persision. And I feel you because its like i'm hearing myself talk exept with your venom... Thank you for saying thankx and DONT go nowhere i'll have to hire a P.I. to find Scholar

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