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another little girl
By cre
knees hit the floor
and a little girl
prays
please please god
just take me away
amidst
the clatter
and the crashing thuds
then silence, then footsteps
and there's no time to run
she tries to bar the door
even
though she'll lose
and her head will hit the wall
when he smashes
into the room
she'll crawl for the closet
but that will make
it worse
he just looms out of the darkness
and reaches in and
grabs her
and then it's just dark
and hours have died
away
and her body hurts
and she wonders why she prayed
there's blood
and she's seen too much of life
and even though
there's pain
she doesn't want to cry
she whispers
to
where ever god may be
i hate you now
for never hearing me
and tears fall
and puddle under her head
and she closes
her eyes and wants
to only wake up dead
but she will see another
day
in her torn-up little world
it's just another life
of another little girl.
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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Friday, June 27, 2003.
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On Wednesday, January 4, 2012, another_forgotten_nobody
(2)
wrote:
my god that is amazing i love it
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On Wednesday, July 27, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(242) wrote:
breathtaking. This is haunting, moving, everything it should be. Wonderful write. -kitty
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On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, CorruptedLittleGirl
(253) wrote:
Tragic and beautiful.
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On Wednesday, May 25, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
This is sad and powerful. And yet this happens to so many...
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On Wednesday, May 25, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
But no one sees that...
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A former member wrote:
*hugs*
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On Friday, April 8, 2005, rondant
(58) wrote:
wow, this is so sad....Ronda
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On Wednesday, March 16, 2005, sIo
(926) wrote:
jesus christ...
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On Wednesday, March 16, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
oh wow..this painfully beautiful! i'm speechless..
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A former member wrote:
Truly Sad Work, Although very straightforward. I like it's sing-along type feel but mixed with an incredible sadness to it. Truly a masterpiece Cre
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On Saturday, August 21, 2004, yslehc
(334) wrote:
wow cant believe i've never read this one before.. awesome job with it.. very sad, and true
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On Wednesday, July 30, 2003, Liz
(267) wrote:
Why is it that some people live this, others cry for and, and some never even admit it exists at all? I commend you for your brutal honesty and tender writing.
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A former member wrote:
this was very sad and visual. the poor little girl that was crying her eyes out in my head brought up similar, gloomy emotions. delicate write. :)
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On Wednesday, July 2, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
*Deep Breath* It is a sad story, a sad write that has been told a thousand different ways in a million different words. Every piece like this one, I absorb and I cry for. Yet every individual story, I do not remember. In a sea of like horrible tales…yours
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On Wednesday, July 2, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
DOES stand out for the class with which you told it. A thing so delicate is often hard to subjugate to technique and style….yet you did. That is *as I was told by a teacher* true writing talent. Very, very well told. Flows wonderfully and is nothing less
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On Wednesday, July 2, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
then what I’ve come to appreciate as your beauty and your heart. ~DW~
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, celestine_moon
(46) wrote:
took my breath away and put tears in my eyes. too close for comfort. -moon
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A former member wrote:
wow...thats astounding...
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
it's like a memory that doesn't quite come when you think of it... barely there... slips away when you try to corner it... ::sighs:: things like this should never be.
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On Monday, June 30, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
i've found it harder and harder to read your works... i find shades of life and little scraps of things buried, not ready to surface in my head that are burned into reality by your words...
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On Monday, June 30, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
pain, not so ephemeral not so beautiful as the romantic would have it seem... seeming... dreaming... lost and dying...
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On Friday, June 27, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
The way you write is so haunting and sad. It is really good.
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A former member wrote:
i agree.Definatly haunting.Wow,i really like this...
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On Friday, June 27, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
I agree with Justin, beautiful flow, haunting. It literally made me shake when I read it, because it is true, yet it is fantasy. Another very very good write.
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A former member wrote:
wow... that is a very good piece I really liked how if flowed and actualy caused a shiver to run through my spine. very good job.
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