Love or Lust? For A Succubus

By TyrantAvDetForbannet

Beautiful demoness, your skin is so cold

I'd gladly shed my blood for you to keep you warm

Your eyes too, speak of what i hold

A heart of stone, that you try to tempt me with your wicked form

How strange...

When I'm with you...I'm still alone

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Published on Sunday, May 15, 2011. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Love or Lust? For A Succubus"

On Friday, February 15, 2019, Jonas Robinson (867) wrote:

I can't always tell if it's love or lust either. I know that we artists do fall in love more often. Sometimes, though it's an illusion. And sometimes, I feel so shallow for the misconception. I like that you expressed these very thoughts and emotions within your writing. :)
On Saturday, July 28, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (303) wrote:

I love when someone manages to pack so much into so few words, beautiful ode to a femme fatale.
On Wednesday, July 11, 2012, Nehema (960) wrote:

Where have you been? I just found you cuz you logged on, I hope you are staying, I like your style. I'll be reading through more of you today ;) Welcome home - XXOO
On Wednesday, July 11, 2012, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274) wrote:

Thank you for the warm welcome, I cant wait till everyone find's out i'm back. I look forward to your imput on my other works. You rock!
A former member wrote: to want something so badly yet still not feel any different once you have it
On Thursday, February 2, 2012, terris crimson (169) wrote:

my story over and over again. love it. this is amazing.
A former member wrote: How cruel that feeling must be. I feel most of us can relate.
On Sunday, January 15, 2012, RubyXero (484) wrote:

what depth this held for 6 lines... and so true as well. ^*_*^ loved it!
On Thursday, December 1, 2011, AllenTaylor (39) wrote:

Sucking the life right out of us...Left out to dry. I like this. A lot.
On Thursday, December 1, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274) wrote:

Absolutely! seem's to be the story of our lives at times.
On Thursday, December 1, 2011, Lylani (116) wrote:

There's so much in these few lines, if only we could choose our feelings instead of being at their mercy. But then again if we could, would we? when poetry renders torture like this beautiful
On Thursday, December 1, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274) wrote:

very insightful, and wellsaid. you are definately wise.
On Tuesday, November 29, 2011, heterodynemind (10) wrote:

Have always been intrigued with the concept of Succubus and Incubus. This is a great write, the ending is perfect.
On Tuesday, November 15, 2011, rosemaiden (185) wrote:

this is so captivating...the mysteriousness....
On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274) wrote:

Mysterious as the pisces are.
On Sunday, September 25, 2011, Devilish (2658) wrote:

Damn I forgot how much i loved this...
On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274) wrote:

And i forgot how much i loved that.
A former member wrote: nice..it really makes the reader think and is well put.
On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274) wrote:

I like to provoke thought.
On Monday, July 25, 2011, Devilish (2658) wrote:

Hmmm! Oh how sweet the feel! Hello there... I love reading your work! It has a kiss to it that leaves me wanting more but at the same time i'm satisfied... How strange yet erotic!
On Monday, May 16, 2011, Ladyhawke (394) wrote:

Wow, this is so amazing! The feelings of your love betraying you and leaving you cold, when clearly your love is as powerful as the sun. . .great write. Welcome to DP:)
On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274) wrote:

Exactly lady hawke.
On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274) wrote:

i'm glad you understand and enjoy.
A former member wrote: wow, i'm really entertained you should do a follow up and tell me more :) PLZZ! sounds kinda like me
On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274) wrote:

thank you!