Bloodstained Petals

By Quietus

                                                    She closes

                                           Her eyes as

                                  She cuts her vein



                         And her blood cascades                 

                                Like a million                           

                                     Luscious rose petals                          





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Copyright 2011 Quietus
Published on Friday, May 13, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Just a short little poem I wrote. It's not very original but I think its pretty :P
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  • Quietus On Sunday, May 15, 2011, Quietus (83)By person wrote:

    Thank you :)

  • ShadowWalker On Saturday, May 14, 2011, ShadowWalker (193)By person wrote:

    Soft demise.. A beautiful insight. Thank you.

  • Corinthian On Friday, May 13, 2011, Corinthian (360)By person wrote:

    its very beautiful , soft crestfallen ... quiet i like that

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