monster

By the broken

people
they say i'm weird
they want me to die
they call me a psychopath
i say come near me and you'll meet my wraith

they say i'm a monster
i can't feel
my heart is the blackest steel
but this
this is only partly true

i am a psychopath
i can't feel
but
i can see
see the small light
in a tainted world
the crying child
in the crowd of blood
the small innocence in the world
screaming to be saved
so yes i am a monster
but at least i can see the light

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Copyright 2011 joshua lee mccourt
Published on Sunday, May 8, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Very deep. And it speaks for itself. Beautifully dark.

  • A former member wrote: whats ever wrong with being a monster?

  • A former member wrote: Good write bro. Im actually working on something Ive title Monster as well. I enjoy seeing the views of others. Thanks for sharing.

  • Devilish On Thursday, June 16, 2011, Devilish (2658)By person wrote:

    Personaly I like monsters especialy when there under my bed... Lovely!!! Scholar

  • A former member wrote: "Yes I am a monster, but at least I can see the light." You can't be a monster. Monsters don't see that. If no one else does, or if they ignose it, ten they're the monster, not you. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: the last part of this poem proves your not a monster Scholar


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