polychrome hyenas crying like razorbacks

By NikesRain

this is for them

it's definitely

not

for
you

pouty lipped
skipping stone styled
faint(feign)ing
parasite

pinning
pining
lost love
found.less

done up
torn down
penned up
oh poor('d)....
overdone
so worn out

crest fallen
false pain
narccissistic
feeding vain

shrink/stink/ing violet

this is definitely
not for you

but about you

which probably still

makes you happy

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Published on Tuesday, March 22, 2011. Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Do not cry havoc, where you should but hunt with modest warrant

Awards

March 16th, 2015

Comments on "polychrome hyenas crying like razorbacks"

On Tuesday, March 17, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm (1703) wrote:

I love the closing lines of this piece...boom... : ) Ciao, T/S
On Sunday, July 31, 2011, NikesRain (1298) wrote:

ironic that only one person thought to inquire if this was directed at them... hmm
On Friday, April 15, 2011, Riven Waker (323) wrote:

severely efficient - yet a beautiful flow - smashing piece
A former member wrote: I have this lil chihuahua.... not quite 5 lbs... and I'll be damned if that lil thing won't go ballistic trying to protect me from anything... anyone. And I think to myself.... I owe that lil bugger my life..... and as long as I'm alive... I'll be damned if anyone's gonna hurt that tiny dog. I don't know why... but for some reason... this made me think of that. Or maybe I know why and I just won't say.... *big bear hugs for the rafter goddess* may your world smile upon you every day, hon. always.
On Wednesday, March 23, 2011, Meadowhawk (163) wrote:

Cleverly done. Enjoyable piece.
A former member wrote: Superb & clever. Keeps you going to the end. Like a well placed backhand or left hook.
On Tuesday, March 22, 2011, serenesavage91 (34) wrote:

Wow this way really good! I like the attitude u have in this and how colorful u made it :)
A former member wrote: this isnt for you its about you love it!