On Echoed Whispers (with the lovely HumanityImpaled)

By Malice In Wonderland

Fingertips are feathers
caressing a sand castle wall
in a dungeon
that never sees
the rising of the Sun.

Wandering
On echoed whispers
Bouncing off the crumbling walls
And lovers lips,
(you taste like a disaster in the making)

A nectar based frosting
on a cake made of nitro...
I can not blow
for fear of granulating you...
so I simply wrap my mouth
around the candle
and extinguish you
with my tongue.

The burn means nothing anymore...
and your lips are smooth
and cold as marble,
and I could suffocate like this forever...

As these barbs
falling from the heavens
feel like rain drops kissing my skin
and
I would rather be nowhere...
but here...
in your arms.

And
we're walled into eternity...
heedless of our bloodied skins
and scarred feet...
I feel
the silken threads
of your hair on my cheek.

Your breath
feels like
a calming storm
that pulls
each and every hair
on the back of my neck
to a taut,
straightened,
to the point of breaking,
position.
There is no catching
of the breath.

And it's like ice rushing through my lungs

And a-fib has never felt so amazing...

And your arms
flow like silken sheets around me...
I'm wondering
if is this heaven or hell.

Fantasy
and
reality..
feel like a pair of male rams...
butting horns
for a girl
they both dreamed of...

I'm a dreamer by nature,
and a realist,
second best
but I'm starting to see your better then either...

And...
I don't really care
if the locusts swarm us ..
as long as I die protecting you.

I don't care if I die,
so long as I die with you...
We block out the world,
any other time...

I don't care if I die, so long as I die with you...
we block out the world, any other time...

Two embers in a camp fire...
slowly smolder down..

one...
into the other.

Both...
into
each
other.


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Copyright 2011 Rain In The Willows / HumanityImpaled
Published on Friday, February 25, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

With Tim... this was fun and amazing to write, thank you! <3<3<3
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  • NikesRain On Thursday, March 17, 2011, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    a beautiful tango of your talents shown here... as blue said rhythmic, charged and haunting.... as it should be

  • blue On Sunday, February 27, 2011, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    mmmm....the rhythmic to and fro is nearly tangible.... a sexually charged sadistic haunt.. ~b

  • A former member wrote: Absolutely lovely.

  • A former member wrote: how epically pretty...and dreamed........i'd expect nothing less from you both. :)

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