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Strangers
By 10 Forty Three
Strangers, I have come to know.
These
strangers,
I have come to love.
They
are
there for me when
my
own
family
treats me like a shadow
when I'm
in
need of a mere presence.
These strangers and I,
live
together in
darkness.
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Copyright 2011 10 Forty Three
Author's Note:
This poem is dedicated to all the DP poets I have come to know and love.Awards
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On Saturday, March 23, 2019, sTr8-jAcKeT
(735)
wrote:
That's pretty cool dude! Gratz on poem of the day on this one. Here's to you too amigo!
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A former member wrote:
It's so wonderful to find a loving and accepting community, and your presence here just makes it that much better. Glad you're here.
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On Friday, September 16, 2016, SilenttPerception
(27) wrote:
Excellent structuring. I will make sure to litter comments on your works more often. I have been dissecting your profile and you are a great writer. Great job on this one manipulating the atmosphere of the poem to get a message across.
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On Friday, September 16, 2016, 10 Forty Three
(593) wrote:
Thank you, SilenttPerception. I appreciate the kind words.
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A former member wrote:
oooh i liked it very much. Though the format annoyed me but that's just because my eyes does funyn things when it has to move fast. It actually does it great justice (the format that is, not my eyes :P) just makes it hard for my eyes to read -_- well done though, i loved it.
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A former member wrote:
The format is a really nice added touch, very sad none the less. Howdi stranger. I really love your profile description. Always was drawn to 11:05 am myself. Strange.
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On Wednesday, February 16, 2011, 10 Forty Three
(593) wrote:
Thanks you all! :)
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On Wednesday, February 16, 2011, goingnowhere
(5) wrote:
Great message, i loved it.
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A former member wrote:
love it it's two poems in one im so glad ive come to know you too
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On Wednesday, February 16, 2011, maliceman
(32) wrote:
i love the way the words are all over the place, makes the eyes feel shifty and gives a paranoid feel to it
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