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how should i die
By the broken
o sigh o sigh
how should i die
could be cooked in a fire
tried there by wire
bleed out like a pig
mabey my killer
could carve his sig
boiled in a pot
that sounds so hot
sliced into pieces
shaped like large reeses
hung
by a noose
they do call me a noosence
or mabey
if i'm lucky i could be eatin
before hand could be beatin
so many way to die
so little time o sigh o sigh....
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Copyright 2011 joshua lee mccourt
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A former member wrote:
Kind of innocent and scary to me.....I love it!
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On Thursday, September 22, 2011, soloiq
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wrote:
liking it.......and your ''sigh o sigh'' line.....i really wish i came up with that first man
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A former member wrote:
it displays the simple surrender of one's self in such a modern way, good write, hope it's not considered though.
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A former member wrote:
Good write, despite the fact that in a way it is funny, it also shows the darker side of the emotions that have been put into this, so like i said, good write :)
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A former member wrote:
Lol that was funny. Good poem I like it.
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