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Peel Away My Layers
By Malcholm Dark
Take
me, I belong to you
And peel away my layers.
Devour me.
Smell my steamy flesh
My tantalizing aroma.
Devour
me.
Gorge yourself on me
You ravenous devil.
Devour me.
Take me, I belong to you
And peel away my
layers.
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My existence is limited.
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Devour me until I am no more.
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I am a Bloomin' Onion.
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Copyright 2011 Malcholm Dark
Author's Note:
I had one the other day at the Outback steak house, pure heavenAwards
Comments on "Peel Away My Layers"
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On Tuesday, April 1, 2014, DeepLoversPoet
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wrote:
OMG I loved this even more that ending was just awesome. Thank you for sharing I hope you keep writing. :)
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A former member wrote:
I liked this poem very much, even if it's not what I expected. Very good.
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On Saturday, October 22, 2011, whisperingwalls
(219) wrote:
I loved the metaphor between onion and man, well orchestrated. And any piece that is dedicated to our supper is well-recieved. I had a steak that I had to commemorate, next time i`ll make sure it comes with onions.
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On Thursday, February 10, 2011, 10 Forty Three
(593) wrote:
Splendid! Great piece! Don't we all wish to be devoured?
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A former member wrote:
haha.... love the outback.... when all the layers are peeled...... just an empty plate remains..... once bloomed..... never shall it remain. well done, man.
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On Saturday, January 29, 2011, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
Haha "You cannibalistic devil." If cannibalism is to eat one's own kind, does that mean you're actually an onion? Man I haven't had a bloomin' onion in years, definitely reminds of those good times though. Write on.
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