Missionary Position

By Stranger

My hands upon your knees
I am Moses parting the waters

With your love you widen
Even farther than legs can go
Like a Bible opening to a secret passage

I run my fingers down the page
Looking for the word
That can save a man’s soul
That can freeze and shatter time

Now I am like Noah
Waiting out the storm
Waiting out the wrath of God
Waiting to seed the earth

You open the glowing gate to Eden
The birthplace of creation calling me home

Now I am like Adam
Heaping taboo upon my plate
My penis in the hand of woman
Leading me out of paradise

Our sins exposed like
Eve’s shame revealed
We ask forgiveness
Of a cherub and a sword

But these doors were closed long before
We chose this skin
Of animal and beast

So now you ask to call me master
And you beg to see my whip
For you are sure the joy of service
Will illuminate your path

But I am slave by noble birth
And I will not wear a mask

And before this night is over
We shall kneel together one last time
Our shackles of iron and wood like
Tight crowns upon our wrists and ankles

And I will look into your eyes
And watch the fire dying there
For you know a savior is coming
And you know that it is not I











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Copyright 2003 Stranger
Published on Tuesday, June 17, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Jonas Robinson On Saturday, July 14, 2018, Jonas Robinson (525)By person wrote:

    I really enjoyed this one.

  • CosmicFrailty On Friday, January 5, 2018, CosmicFrailty (206)By person wrote:

    The thought that went into this is incredible. Well done.

  • Cassette On Wednesday, December 20, 2017, Cassette (1295)By person wrote:

    I usually don't go for erotic themes, but this was very tasteful and deep

  • Nemo On Thursday, December 22, 2016, Nemo (133)By person wrote:

    hot and very deep i like it good job

  • sIo On Monday, November 28, 2016, sIo (894)By person wrote:

    Breathtaking.

  • SilenttPerception On Monday, September 19, 2016, SilenttPerception (31)By person wrote:

    whoaaaa, well damn, i just saw words come out in power amazing! insane my friend thank you for this.

  • drasticdaydreams On Monday, August 22, 2016, drasticdaydreams (73)By person wrote:

    Fantastic turn at the end. Thought provoking

  • Broken doll On Sunday, March 6, 2016, Broken doll (18)By person wrote:

    Well written, very stimulating

  • Lab Rat On Sunday, January 3, 2016, Lab Rat (158)By person wrote:

    glorious sacrelige, provocatively religious

  • A former member wrote: This is one of the best poems I have read in a while. Had me from the beginning to the very end. So erotic, yet...well...biblical. An interesting and effective blending of the two. Nice job!

  • rwb35 On Monday, November 9, 2015, rwb35 (92)By person wrote:

    Very erotic and thought provoking, well done

  • urbanhumility On Monday, September 14, 2015, urbanhumility (1208)By person wrote:

    Love your parallel here...well spoken..well done...

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Monday, August 10, 2015, Intoxicating Delirium (414)By person wrote:

    This is awesome! Religion and sex, perfection. Haha.

  • Arch and Breezeblock On Saturday, December 20, 2014, Arch and Breezeblock (77)By person wrote:

    the complications of sex and expectation, seen through a kaleidoscope of biblical allegory, the need for a saviour and master to guide the way when neither of you are really out of the lost and found box... trying to find guidance in another person, trying to absorb someone else's truth. this gave me a lot to think about! thank you.

  • A former member wrote: This is a powerful and tantalizing piece! I'm glad that I found it.. I have to read more from you.. Such a delightful piece of art deserves to be worshiped and bookmarked! :)

  • Devilish On Wednesday, May 25, 2011, Devilish (3799)By person wrote:

    Naughty naughty! I love it... Scholar

  • ubiquitoussoul On Thursday, August 12, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (413)By person wrote:

    Epic is the word hear... Definitely a twisted spiraling take on the missionary position...you take us among a wide horizon..a grand scene set upon the waters...the words speak oceans..it was sensual and smart..thanks

  • Deaths Apostle On Tuesday, December 22, 2009, Deaths Apostle (81)By person wrote:

    muhahaha

  • Blood Saga On Sunday, August 2, 2009, Blood Saga (91)By person wrote:

    wow.

  • gnrrain On Wednesday, May 27, 2009, gnrrain (19)By person wrote:

    Flowed wonderfully. --David--

  • A former member wrote: Damn!! fast paced yet with a sensual cadence... simply loved it

  • blue On Wednesday, June 11, 2008, blue (1457)By person wrote:

    HOLYHELL! By far one of the best poems I've read here. Dig it. ~b

  • Niemand On Thursday, January 10, 2008, Niemand (368)By person wrote:

    Fuck...-Gin

  • A former member wrote: eroticly beautiful

  • A former member wrote: This left me very uncomfortably entertained.

  • A former member wrote: This is amazing. It's incredibly well written, and the picture you convey is just awesome. I'll be reading more of your work.

  • A former member wrote: Hmm.. It seems as though the "desires of the flesh" that you are trying so hard to get rid of are the things that you don't really want to get rid of in the first place.

  • Mari On Friday, June 2, 2006, Mari (427)By person wrote:

    psh do you really want forgiveness?

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Monday, April 24, 2006, TheBardOfBlasphemy (365)By person wrote:

    wow this poem was, wow. so damn sexy it was dripping off the screen.

  • A former member wrote: lol @ markus' comment... the biblical and sensual allegory is an interesting pairing... God never meant for sex to be evil... in it's proper place. So there really is nothing wrong with using the two together. great write.

  • Sticky Kitty On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, Sticky Kitty (253)By person wrote:

    this was amazing took my breath away so lovely -kitty

  • Dei On Thursday, April 14, 2005, Dei (708)By person wrote:

    this was.. sacriligouse... yay!!!

  • stormtalk On Saturday, January 22, 2005, stormtalk (735)By person wrote:

    The content of this was incredible; the presentation clear enough to do it justice. And I would not be doing it justice if I didn't make it a favorite. Very nice work.

  • xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx On Sunday, October 24, 2004, xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx (36)By person wrote:

    Very nice. I loved how you used the bible for such a sinful thing (bad bad bad - shame on you!) lol.

  • A former member wrote: i really like this. by using the bible in your poem, it creates even more sensuality. i never thought i'd use those 2 words togther- bible and sensual...

  • Malice In Wonderland On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (1026)By person wrote:

    Definatle with GB on this, well writter, love the biblical spin, very sensual... Kya Scholar

  • A former member wrote: very beautiful... Scholar

  • BeautifulCalamity On Thursday, September 30, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (434)By person wrote:

    i agree, very good biblical references and stuff.. lovely write..

  • A former member wrote: Superb use of Biblical metaphor … GB

  • -Oz- On Thursday, September 9, 2004, -Oz- (146)By person wrote:

    wow, sex and the bible, combined into one, amazing.....-Oz-

  • elisa On Thursday, September 9, 2004, elisa (1645)By person wrote:

    now this is some unholiness I can sink my teeth in;) this is hot! elisa

  • capt_funguy On Thursday, August 26, 2004, capt_funguy (807)By person wrote:

    woah ... fuckin' beautiful ... kept such consistant tone , with perfect pitch throughout .. simply fascinating approach ... this isimportant work ... funguy

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Tuesday, January 13, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (506)By person wrote:

    Beautiful, I loved it. Naughty, but nice..great write..

  • Drea On Thursday, September 25, 2003, Drea (1513)By person wrote:

    very very good. the emotion, the passion.. very raw.. i like it a lot. ~Drea~

  • diavolessa On Saturday, September 20, 2003, diavolessa (225)By person wrote:

    it's so amazing how you have put in unison two things that most of the world percieves like North and South. This is beaty and sensuality...


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