A Morning Occurence

By Crush_With_Eyeliner

It occurs
to me
(in the morning)
the Hungry Ghosts
are those
who
will never
know the
warmth
of your touch.

Such knowledge
is transformative.


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Copyright 2011 Crush_With_Eyeliner
Published on Thursday, January 13, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Friday, January 14, 2011, carlosjackal (3010)By person wrote:

    Those last 2 lines....ZAP! Brilliant piece to put into a pocket and read at those times in the day when the muse is low on the radar.

  • A former member wrote: haunting little reverie.....wish i could hone in on succinct beauty.....excellent dreamstate. colliding with reality.

  • Malcholm Dark On Thursday, January 13, 2011, Malcholm Dark (810)By person wrote:

    well done... a short piece that says so very much... beware the hungry ghosts... write on

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