Making It Right

By Gray Vision

Tonight,
I rekindled an old spark,
A friendship that I thought long forgotten,
Resurfaced.
As I drained my aching heart,
Upon thy keyboard,
Spilling every bit of remorse,
I had intended to for far too long.
It’s black and blue complexion,
Began to resume its beautiful,
Vibrant,
Rich,
Maroon state.
The regret it once withheld,
The pain it once endured,
Had now been set free,
Swapped with a clean slate,
And now,
Has been replaced,
With throbs of joy.
It feels so good,
To make things right.
As we push forth,
In this new beginning,
The perfect end,
To such a wonderful night.

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Copyright 2011 Gray Vision
Published on Tuesday, January 4, 2011.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Welcome back:) great to see you back pal..with such a beautiful and warm piece:)thanks for sharing.

  • Gray Vision On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision (425)By person wrote:

    ES my friend every time I turn around you're here, but I could never catch you. I hope you're doing alright so far in this new year. Thank you for commenting and hopefully we can catch up soon =)

  • A former member wrote: A wonderful write my friend. Nice to see your back again. Please write on! :)

  • Gray Vision On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision (425)By person wrote:

    Omgosh Foster it's good to hear from you to, I see your works are just as beautiful as ever. Thank you for dropping by I'll try to catch you on here asap =)

  • lupus tenebrae On Tuesday, January 4, 2011, lupus tenebrae (872)By person wrote:

    A rekindled spark, resurfacing friendships, new beginnings, sounds like a good night to me. It's nice to see that some friendships can be reborn nowadays, write on. Scholar

  • Gray Vision On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision (425)By person wrote:

    Yes it's very exciting, we're doing great since we last spoke, I'm just glad its all settled now and we can start fresh. Thank you for commenting =)

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