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Edge Of Obscurity
By Malcholm Dark
I've
reached the edge of reality
The breakdown of my mind.
Where
voices have become echoes
Where spirits have once shined.
I've reached the edge of forever
The ending of my time.
Where
death is never questioned
Where reason is the rhyme.
I've
reached the edge of obscurity
The prospect for my crime.
Where
nowhere is now second nature
Where life ain't worth a dime.
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Copyright 2010 Malcholm Dark
Author's Note:
when nothing matters and life becomes staleAwards
Comments on "Edge Of Obscurity"
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A former member wrote:
love this one, keep it up.
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On Saturday, August 27, 2011, alesana
(41)
wrote:
that was really cool! nice work
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A former member wrote:
Been there, Un-done by that....
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A former member wrote:
Its like when you dont get sleep for days...voices seems distant and vision is a blur and you just dont care about anything. Nicely written:)thanks for sharing:)
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On Friday, December 24, 2010, DarkDruidess
(326) wrote:
ahh yes I've been there...nicely done.
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On Friday, December 24, 2010, alex herewane
(150) wrote:
I kinda see an openendiness to this, is the next step the start of something new or is the next step the one that sends you into oblivian. When your hanging over the edge and it's only your finger nails holding you, well that can be a good time to start your climb back up, I'm just raving,have a great festive season and no doudt I'll get to read and enjoy your work some more.!
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On Thursday, December 23, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
A familiar territory indeed, makes me picture a world painted entirely in gray. Colorless, bland, lackluster, nicely put. Exceptional as always, write on my friend.
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On Thursday, December 23, 2010, TheProphetUntold
(167) wrote:
A dark and gently flowing stream of thoughts. It is apparent you took some time to make this tight. Noted and appreciated. Nice piece. +tpu+
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