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In My Place
By ColorMeToxic
I understand
the scars will always be there.
You tell me, overtime they will fade.
What do I do when overtime, I don't have scars...
but fresh bleeding wounds of hate?
I want to tell you to go to hell
I want you off my case
I want to make you feel as I have felt
So you can stand here in my place.
Shivering, cold, all by yourself
I'll leave you, to your new-found fate
Crying tears of anger, can't help you now...
For now, you understand my hate
So I tell you to go to hell
I say to get off my case
I've made you feel as I have felt...
How did you like standing there...
In my place?
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© 2015 Beth Greene
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On Thursday, May 16, 2019, Divine hell
(249)
wrote:
Beautifully written, no one knows what its like to climb out of a dark place until they themselves make that climb.
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On Wednesday, December 15, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
An exceptional write, standing in your place, forced to understand your hate. Taken out of their comfort zone, thanks for this piece.
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A former member wrote:
It was a consistent strong feeling...
Sounds like lyrics. Does it?
Well done
Pavel
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