Simple Things

By Aurora_Light

I don't want a bed of roses or even a bouquet.
One single rose is all I need to brighten the saddest of days.
I don't want gold or diamond rings or even strings of peals.
Your smile and your laughter are the greatest gifts in the world.
Don't shower me with attention I'm not use to all the fuss.
Don't call and talk forever say "I love you" then hang up.
I need you to walk be side me so I can look into your eyes.
I need you to hold me when I'm frightened and scared inside.
I may need your shoulder to cry on or a slap across the face at times.
If you truly love me as you say you do.
Show me these simple things,
For it's the simple things that say,
I love you.

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Copyright 2003 Amanda L. Mrozinski
Published on Friday, June 13, 2003.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • kaitoudark On Sunday, May 2, 2010, kaitoudark (45)By person wrote:

    I think you've changed my thoughts... ...

  • liquid_emotion On Monday, July 26, 2004, liquid_emotion (356)By person wrote:

    the only thing that shocked a bit was the unprepared for _slap across the face_

  • A former member wrote: i love this one..so very good and so very true as i myself..cherish the simplest things...

  • A former member wrote: it was very sweet and refreshing. i enjoyed it.

  • Abbyernathie On Friday, August 8, 2003, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    awwwwwww. even tho i read it before. great write my friend.

  • Blinded_Tiger On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (532)By person wrote:

    I read this long ago. I was moved then, and i am now. I like it alot Light. Lots and lots :)

  • Blood of Winter On Thursday, July 31, 2003, Blood of Winter (300)By person wrote:

    Touching little piece.

  • The_Scavenger On Thursday, June 26, 2003, The_Scavenger (31)By person wrote:

    I really like this poem. but im still going to treat you the way i always have so nananenana he he

  • Midnight Phoenix On Monday, June 23, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (243)By person wrote:

    Wow, look at all the attention this piece piece pulled in. You've painted a wonderful theme here. It teaches us all what's really important. Bravo!

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, June 23, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1709)By person wrote:

    Lovely sentiments - Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Stranger On Thursday, June 19, 2003, Stranger (273)By person wrote:

    What is really important: beautifully distilled. I would love for a women to say such things to me.

  • IceDragoness On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, IceDragoness (201)By person wrote:

    this is really nice, just saying it how it is, gotta love the honesty ~Dawn

  • maddin foxxxy On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, maddin foxxxy (363)By person wrote:

    sincere, simple and yet profound...precious indeed...that's the way it should be.

  • manywalks On Saturday, June 14, 2003, manywalks (772)By person wrote:

    Such a gentle and beautiful piece. ~ mw

  • Six-Out On Saturday, June 14, 2003, Six-Out (1483)By person wrote:

    Very nice. Not what I was expecting, but nice indeed. You put yourself out, in the most poetic way. Bravo.

  • A former member wrote: simple things are best...i have found myslef saying some of those same things to a guy....back in the day...i relate...yep

  • DoctorAsh On Saturday, June 14, 2003, DoctorAsh (389)By person wrote:

    ah man ... this is cool . im not sure why, but this played the right chords: ::KABOOM:: a favorite poem ..Extyreamly beautiful work here. Very well done. :D&A:

  • A former member wrote: Aww how sweet. Is that *GASP* innocence showing through?? lol great write though

  • Aurora_Light On Saturday, June 14, 2003, Aurora_Light (482)By person wrote:

    hmm i think it could be oh well, i cant be a bitch all the time can i?

  • Aurora_Light On Friday, June 13, 2003, Aurora_Light (482)By person wrote:

    it's really old but i figured i'ld post it anyway even if it is kinda happy sappy

  • A former member wrote: that was absolutely gorgeous...if your anything like me it becomes hard to write "love" themed poems but this seemed to come easily....if she makes you feel ike this it's worth keeping.

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