Slaves & Bulldozers

By Crush_With_Eyeliner

Everything I've shown
is what I feel.
No use to
disguise the obvious.
It was all flow - :
no ebb.

It was all
crescendo.

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Copyright 2010 Crush_With_Eyeliner
Published on Friday, November 19, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: crescendo? no forte? no mezzo? this held a certain spell of disaster amidst the brevity of emotives. i could never master the style of a short imperative...i prattle....and this makes me feel like lighting a candle and considering everything i feel and how anyone i give those feelings to feels as well...how i am nothing much but a bountiful tangle of wrecking feelings......

  • A former member wrote: such as short piece but very powerful to me, that last line...wow, what a perfect way to close.

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