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Imcomplete
By musicalsuicide
You always want to hold me.
No matter where we are,
Or what we
are doing,
You always want me with you.
I don't understand.
Why do you love me?
Why am I so amazing in your eyes?
You look
into my eyes,
Kiss me on the cheek,
Tell me everything is perfect.
I feel so dark though.
Even when you are trying to show me
some sort of light.
I hold your hand.
Bite my lip.
I just
deal with it.
I feel love is impossible.
Why can't I feel that
way.
I want to smile like you do.
Laugh at you when you
are being silly.
Feel complete passion with one simple touch.
But I am imcomplete.
Heartless.
Broken forever.
Never
to know what it is like.
To feel immortal love.
I
am too lost for you.
But you will still stay.
And maybe
someday........................
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Copyright 2010 musicalsuicide
Author's Note:
This is really just a poem I wrote in like 3 minutes.Comments on "Imcomplete"
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A former member wrote:
My favorite part is that it is incomplete.
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A former member wrote:
Sigh... It touched me because it reminded me of when i was the one who loved the girl that couldnt love me... I like the hope at the end... and i feel so dumb saying this but I feel like I have some understanding towards that person of my past... Keep up the blissful work..
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On Wednesday, November 3, 2010, Iwas
(39)
wrote:
Such blinding loneliness even in the face of love. But in the end a shimmer of hope? Beautiful. thank you for sharing.
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