Summability

By Crush_With_Eyeliner

A conceptual lust;
minds and knees
bending
like bodies folding
together.
A mind that works too much.
A heart too
primitive
to understand.
My tear to your cheek;
my lungs to your eyes.
This is all conceptual;
we don't even
really exist
at all.

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Copyright 2003 Crush_With_Eyeliner
Published on Thursday, October 7, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: brilliant, these snapshots work together so well. i love the fragmented feel of this work and such a heart wrenching end. wow.

  • A former member wrote: Smoldering imagery... This one has teeth.

  • A former member wrote: inexplicably noted.........the cumulative ending of terrible insight... again, great stuff.

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