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Somedays...
By Aurora_Light
Somedays I feel like crying,
Somedays I wanna laugh.
Somedays I curl up in a ball,
On others I take a bubble bath.
Somedays I feel so special,
Somedays I feel like shit.
Somedays I wonder why I'm here,
The others I live on a whim.
It's all dependent on my mood,
The life I lived that day.
The way my lover spoke to me,
The way my father yelled and screamed.
Somedays I want to kill myself,
And then I remember why.
Why I'm here the point to it all,
The reasons I'm me and no one else.
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Copyright 2003 Amanda L. Mrozinski
Published on Tuesday, June 10, 2003.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Somedays..."
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On Thursday, June 3, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335)
wrote:
true true. i agree with u. awesome piece. -MeL-
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A former member wrote:
i really liked this, it starts off very light and ends emotionally, beautiful
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On Thursday, January 8, 2004, fritzwraith
(24) wrote:
It's a piece that helps some readers put words in their emotions. Great piece!
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A former member wrote:
i feel those somedays everyday sweetie. nice work.
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On Friday, August 8, 2003, Abbyernathie
(61) wrote:
i'd come up w/ an original comment but nae's comment summs it up fer me. even the part about what i'm lacking. except, it's not my dad who yells it's my mom, but u know how THAT goes.
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On Tuesday, August 5, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I don't know why I never commented on this one before! I like ti and feel the same way u do on most aspects ( u know what one I'm lacking)...Nice Write Tut Tut
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On Thursday, July 31, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
I love it, definitely going in my favorites.
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On Wednesday, July 9, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Ohh man. I realy like this poem. Especialy the ending.
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On Thursday, June 26, 2003, The_Scavenger
(30) wrote:
great write. I can definetly relate. keep up the good work. Its hard to believe that such relief and happiness can come from three little words.
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On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
i can relate 2 this one...it does vary...well done Amanda.
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On Wednesday, June 11, 2003, manywalks
(750) wrote:
...the life I lived that day...what a perfect line. I liked, thanks. ~ mw
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On Wednesday, June 11, 2003, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
ooo .. these two lines spooked loudly [It all depends on my mood, of the life I lived that day.] An A [So powerful and moving] Strike me down with your beauty. Excellent write. [D&A]
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A former member wrote:
i can say that i know how these thoughts would pass through ones head... and for some reason it reminds me of burritoes by sublime... but then again im probably nuts so... thank you for posting it
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On Tuesday, June 10, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
the beinging was planed but the end came as i wrote and so i scraped what i was gonna put there origanily
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