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The Dollhouse
By Mylissa
And when I fade.....
I will lace the air
with the smell
and taste
of burnt plastic of a pretty doll.
~and my
lingering emptiness
will stain the hearts of those who left me broken. ~
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Copyright 2010 Mylissa
Published on Friday, August 27, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, November 29, 2010, Leith Plunkett
(239)
wrote:
wow, beautiful
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A former member wrote:
wow. this is so fantastic.
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A former member wrote:
All dolls have hearts, and a broken heart can be a beautiful weapon. a smoldering, emphatic prophecy... well stated.
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A former member wrote:
Another Intriguing and Incredulous Artistic piece. I look forward to reading more of your work!
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On Friday, August 27, 2010, Beautiful Incidental
(39) wrote:
oh how i love the ones that sting !!!
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On Friday, August 27, 2010, veingo
(532) wrote:
Ah!!! When did you get back?? ^V^
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On Friday, August 27, 2010, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
"And when i fade..." Haunting way to start off. I like the way it makes the reader (me anyway) feel like their walking in on the caboose end of a train of thought, sort of catching it right at climax realization. Who broke you? I'll moiderize em. :) "A real heart-smasher" Yep. Lovely work, MyMy.
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On Friday, August 27, 2010, carlosjackal
(3014) wrote:
A real heart-smasher...So very well done and so good to have you back at DP x
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On Friday, August 27, 2010, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
thank you :}
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