Blood and Water

By Scarrzz


Always moving, Hither, Yon

Essence roils in angry skies


Churning, Raging, Savage Squall

I coalesce and take my flight


Downward, ever Downward go

Amidst the jarring Thunder's Might


Perchance upon a shaking girl,

Her lips are parted as she cries


TAKE ME GOD, TAKE ME NOW


LET YOUR LIGHTNING END MY LIFE


My never ending journey turns

Through darkened tunnels full of strife


Then I am her, and she is me,

For in her eyes, myself I see


Late that night, on into morn

and shaking on the sodden ground


She asks again, “Why should I live,

If this is all you've got to give?”


Pain, and Pain, and Endless Pain,



Forsaken,

                  lying in the rain



Then as the light hints at the sky

Through beauty of a silver mist


She takes the knife and plunges deep

into the breast once tender kissed


I am a pool of flowing red

Mingled now with bitter tears


We are from that pain released,

and take our path unto the sea


Only to begin again

and nevermore to look behind


 

 

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Copyright 2010 Scarrzz
Published on Thursday, August 26, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

It was a subtle thought, but I wrote this from the disembodied perspective of water vapor that coalesces into a single drop of water that falls onto the main character and is consumed, becoming a part of her - then moving on yet again.
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  • A former member wrote: a pool of flowing red. reminds me of the end of the book the great gatsby. such a sad thought sewn into those lines and crawling out among these. the feeling is the same, the ones you want always leave before youve ever thought to say goodbye..~moony (sigh)

  • ubiquitoussoul On Thursday, August 26, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (346)By person wrote:

    Absolutely great work..I enjoyed finding the images in this storming piece..the structure and stitching was done well..great use of personification..to see the storm of this girls life..searching to understand her position..reason..and you being the ultimate figure...at the aid of her death..sad outcome..very moving wording too..

  • Scarrzz On Thursday, August 26, 2010, Scarrzz (238)By person wrote:

    Wow, I'm deeply honored. Thanks Ubi. Scholar


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