pierced

By sanglante

hearts break
while tongues bleed;
rhymes are..
forgotten.

life's choice of:
pen,
brush,
guitar.

was i right?
am i right?
how far
is too far?

birds throwing
their breasts on thorns.
thoughts coming, coming,
and gone. 

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Copyright 2010 cee
Published on Sunday, August 8, 2010.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • Crush_With_Eyeliner On Wednesday, October 13, 2010, Crush_With_Eyeliner (48)By person wrote:

    What a great last stanza. Wonderful title as well.

  • A former member wrote: Love the last verse especially. This is wretchedly beautiful. You spoil us.

  • Moonflower On Sunday, August 8, 2010, Moonflower (301)By person wrote:

    this was lovely, i enjoyed it :)

  • A former member wrote: I really liked this simple and beautiful

  • A former member wrote: "birds throwing/their breasts on thorns." truly stunning..i loved this.

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