Dystopia

By Scarrzz

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Deepening Darkness

Descending Doom


Devilish Desires

Do Fill This Room


Discarded Dreams,

Dilatory Death,


I yearn for you

'till my last breath.



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Copyright 2010 Scarrzz
Published on Friday, July 23, 2010.     Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Entry for the Minimalist contest. - 22 words.

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  • Scarrzz On Sunday, August 15, 2010, Scarrzz (248)By person wrote:

    Awesome comments, everyone. I am humbled to the maximum allowable degree. Scholar

  • ubiquitoussoul On Thursday, August 12, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (413)By person wrote:

    In the darkness that shrouds..when the ink has spilled..over oil filled streets..my hearts beats..I pick up the quill..

  • kinkifrog On Thursday, August 12, 2010, kinkifrog (3272)By person wrote:

    hey!...that's 22 words ...winning comment... Scholar

  • Scarrzz On Wednesday, August 11, 2010, Scarrzz (248)By person wrote:

    Wow, I'm quite pleased, He Who Shall Not Bleed. I accept your honor with many thanks. It was an interesting contest. I was wanting to read the other entries. Is there a place where they're all listed? Maybe a forum post with links? Scholar

  • ubiquitoussoul On Thursday, August 12, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (413)By person wrote:

    . Scarzz..you get a gold Star.. and you win a new Car... Congrats on the minimalist win man..this was well deserves as it was a great entry..as you can see by my comment above.it can be so limiting..but you pulled it off so well..great flow on the meter with such few words.. Cheers.. And to answer the question about viewing others' entries..click on the black "Winner box above" and it will take you to the entry rules..at the bottom you will find the other entrants pieces..Later

  • Rowan On Tuesday, August 10, 2010, Rowan (298)By person wrote:

    That was a great write for so few words. It only proves that a lot can be said whether it be a book or a sentence. Brilliant write.

  • Scarrzz On Wednesday, August 11, 2010, Scarrzz (248)By person wrote:

    Thanks, Rowan. I'm glad you liked it. I haven't seen you about for a while, I think it's time I checked out your new writes since I saw you last. Scholar

  • Rowan On Wednesday, August 11, 2010, Rowan (298)By person wrote:

    Yeah it's been awhile since I've posted anything new. I've been away in Puerto Rico. I'm coming back though!


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