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Dystopia
By Scarrzz
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Deepening Darkness
Descending Doom
Devilish Desires
Do Fill This Room
Discarded Dreams,
Dilatory Death,
I yearn for you
'till my last breath.
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Copyright 2010 Scarrzz
Published on Friday, July 23, 2010.
Filed under: "Structured" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Entry for the Minimalist contest. - 22 words.Awards
Comments on "Dystopia"
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On Sunday, August 15, 2010, Scarrzz
(238)
wrote:
Awesome comments, everyone. I am humbled to the maximum allowable degree.
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On Thursday, August 12, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(346) wrote:
In the darkness that shrouds..when the ink has spilled..over oil filled streets..my hearts beats..I pick up the quill..
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On Thursday, August 12, 2010, kinkifrog
(2798) wrote:
hey!...that's 22 words ...winning comment...
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On Wednesday, August 11, 2010, Scarrzz
(238) wrote:
Wow, I'm quite pleased, He Who Shall Not Bleed. I accept your honor with many thanks. It was an interesting contest. I was wanting to read the other entries. Is there a place where they're all listed? Maybe a forum post with links?
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On Thursday, August 12, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(346) wrote:
. Scarzz..you get a gold Star.. and you win a new Car... Congrats on the minimalist win man..this was well deserves as it was a great entry..as you can see by my comment above.it can be so limiting..but you pulled it off so well..great flow on the meter with such few words.. Cheers.. And to answer the question about viewing others' entries..click on the black "Winner box above" and it will take you to the entry rules..at the bottom you will find the other entrants pieces..Later
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On Tuesday, August 10, 2010, Rowan
(202) wrote:
That was a great write for so few words. It only proves that a lot can be said whether it be a book or a sentence. Brilliant write.
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On Wednesday, August 11, 2010, Scarrzz
(238) wrote:
Thanks, Rowan. I'm glad you liked it. I haven't seen you about for a while, I think it's time I checked out your new writes since I saw you last.
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On Wednesday, August 11, 2010, Rowan
(202) wrote:
Yeah it's been awhile since I've posted anything new. I've been away in Puerto Rico. I'm coming back though!
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