Plastic

By Audrey_Star

I look down
at the city below.
Cars pass each other
like strangers
on
escalators.

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Copyright 2003 Audrey_Star
Published on Friday, June 6, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Blinded_Tiger On Wednesday, July 30, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    M e L i k e s .

  • The_Unspoken On Monday, June 9, 2003, The_Unspoken (5)By person wrote:

    Amazing how much can be said in so few lines

  • A former member wrote: i agree, a very satisfying read for fifteen words....i like

  • A former member wrote: Reminds me of driving and seeing a million different faces and wondering at their life stories...Wonderful.

  • A former member wrote: o.0 its nice so compact

  • manywalks On Friday, June 6, 2003, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    Ah, minimalism that truly works. Nice read, thanks. ~ mw

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