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If Only
By Gray Vision
Maybe it’s a coincidence
or maybe it’s faith,
I happened to stumble
upon such a cute face,
Such beauty
and passion
that’s hard to come by,
Such generosity
and kindness
in such a short time,
Dazzling smile
that can stretch a mile,
And all this time
you’ve
been running wild,
Here at my fingertips
but miles apart,
Longing for the day when
i can disembark, for
Inside
her castle, rests an amazing heart,
that’s strong and true, where
love,
Abounds.
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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Author's Note:
This piece was inspired by someone special, thank you for being you.Comments on "If Only"
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On Monday, March 26, 2012, ColorMeToxic
(240)
wrote:
This is so very sweet. She sure sounds special. :)
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On Monday, March 26, 2012, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
She is as a matter of fact you all are. Thank you for all for dropping by =)
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, XOCHITL
(40) wrote:
Well done! I like you style
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Thank you and welcome to Dp =)
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A former member wrote:
how very moving, a reflection of what's good and true between two people, a gentle blossom and the promise of something epically beautiful.. your heart is so full of ways to inspire..
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
I am so late on my responces lol, goodness, well better later than never I guess. Thank you so much for you insight on this peice I really appreciate it =)
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A former member wrote:
Love is in the air....you lucky @#$.
Read that to her and she is all yours;)
Oh i am sorry for being me;)
But seriously dude nice write and thanks for sharing :)
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On Sunday, July 25, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Heh I love you're enthusiasm in this comment, she knows though, I've already presented this piece to her and yes she does like it. Thanks again =)
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A former member wrote:
I love when fate brings us to the right place and we are then blessed to meet someone who will impact our lives forever. Sweet write. =)
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Everyone we meet impacts our lives in some way, some more so than others but they all pave the path to finding that one person who would and could change things drastically, this includes you KS, thank you for such a heart warming comment =)
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On Monday, June 28, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
A heartwarming tribute, and it gave me one of the biggest headaches last night lol, well done though.
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On Monday, June 28, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Sure thing bud, um wolfy heh, thank you for commenting =)
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A former member wrote:
This was a cute tribute. ...here at my fingertips, but miles apart... I love that part. Good write, my friend, good write. :)
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On Monday, June 28, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Thank you very much Miss, I'm glad you liked it but reading it was half the fun, there's more heh, enjoy =)
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On Monday, June 28, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
excellent, a beautiful write
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On Monday, June 28, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Thank you very much =)
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On Monday, June 28, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
Ah-ha, I just figured out who the lucky lady is... very clever my friend, very clever!
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