Satisfaction

By Chalin

Your
W
O
R
D
S

Fall on me with a blind light
that doesn't see my mussy hair
and faded smile

Dark eyes clouded
with imperfections
and sullen stance.

As i
S
L
I
P
and

T
R
I
P

your acceptance
breaks the

F
A
L
L.

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Published on Monday, July 8, 2002.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • cogitative On Friday, February 24, 2017, cogitative (90)By person wrote:

    encore please

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Friday, February 21, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    Nice piece - good to see you in the new incarnation of the site! Scholar

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