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Grey Skies
By Audrey_Star
A relationship based on a mutual,
bizarre,
mother complex
is risky at best.
When two people set out
to emotionally “save” each other,
you know that risk is no longer an issue . . .
but if one person loves
to disillusion herself,
and the other loves to disillusion everyone else,
then you know they’re
fucked.
But, hey, at least they
Know it’ll be worth it.
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Copyright 2003 Audrey_Star
Published on Thursday, June 5, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Grey Skies"
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On Friday, October 17, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175)
wrote:
brilliant, and intelligent prose, you have spoken well.....urban
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On Tuesday, September 2, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
yes...
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On Wednesday, July 23, 2003, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
"then you know they're fucked" - I couldn't help but laugh at this line. This mournful scene definately has a touch of comedy to it.
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On Wednesday, June 18, 2003, muckraker
(14) wrote:
i actually cackled after reading this...
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On Monday, June 16, 2003, manywalks
(750) wrote:
Well said. ~ mw
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A former member wrote:
It came across as almost comical... making it all the more better. Nice write/observation?
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