Direction??

By asailorsangel

In your eyes I see him
In your smile I feel him
In your touch I am
with him

I have searched my life
for a reason to be
I have wandered around
my whole life lost and
afraid

You surround me with
the light you shadow
me in the dark
You call my name
trapped in between

What is it that you
want, where is it I
should go,
who is it you see
when you look at me?

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Copyright 2003 Renee Trinkaus
Published on Tuesday, June 3, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Kinkypoptart On Sunday, April 24, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    wow. love the way you wrapped this up. Good question... I see talent in you though ~*~Tart~*~

  • Grey Lies On Saturday, April 9, 2005, Grey Lies (186)By person wrote:

    love is like a maze...i guess...nice write

  • diavolessa On Saturday, June 14, 2003, diavolessa (208)By person wrote:

    take me to a place where there are no maps. this are my feelings, this is what you tricked my mind into!

  • A former member wrote: should only be who you wont to be and not care what others want you to be...awsome write though

  • A former member wrote: Being paranoid about what others may want you to be? That is interesting! I like the poem muchos! I feel like I am that way sometimes!

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