Swirling
By Morgoth
Thoughts, Feelings,
Emotions, Chaotic
Swirling---
Skies of blood, prairies of fire, the dead
walk the earth
The tormenting nightmares of the humans made manifest
Corpses litter the horizon and there is nothing left but blood and ashes
The Thoughts of my mind,
Thoughts---
Pain, wounds, cuts, nerves screaming in agony
Tired,
sagging eyes, nervless fingers, stumble and crash
Sick, heaving, reeling,
clutching, sobbing
The Feelings of my body,
Feelings---
Rage, blood pounding, eyes
red, mind gone, quivering and shaking
Anger, madness, welling up,
glaring
Apathy, nothing, void, numb, apart, separate
Sorrow,
tears, curled tight, no one else, alone
Love, happiness, life, energy,
light, alive
The Emotions of my soul,
Emotions---
All of my Thoughts shaping
reality,
My Feelings giving me
focus,
My Emotions breaking reason
and overriding everything else,
Thoughts,
Feelings, Emotions
Coming together in the Chaotic Swirling
of my mind---
Comments on "Swirling"
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On Friday, February 15, 2019, Jonas Robinson
(867) wrote:
A deep expression of universal emotions. :)
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On Saturday, December 21, 2013, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
A genius write and this is where I leave it... Bows-
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A former member wrote:
I loved everything about this poem.
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On Tuesday, January 25, 2011, Poe Etiquette
(124) wrote:
your screen name is morgoth. master of sauron. thats badass
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On Wednesday, January 19, 2011, SulaMoon
(67) wrote:
Very deep, very intense...Very old soul indeed.
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A former member wrote:
somehow this reminds me of a very dark diamante poem...it would be very good inspiration for a diamante poem. the choice of words are spot-on...and the way of writing is unique...just know that we can tame that swirl in the mind with work and patience...wonderful write :) write on!
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On Wednesday, November 10, 2010, Iwas
(39) wrote:
I dig it buddy. Deep seeded hopelessness. Twisting and swirling. like a black hole.
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On Saturday, July 3, 2010, Ladyhawke
(394) wrote:
And, how old are you? You are so way beyond your years in writing, its amazing. So many ways you describe the way you feel, your thoughts, emotions and feelings, all stabbing your heart with every verse. Definetly, a work of art
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On Friday, May 21, 2010, Wiccad
(125) wrote:
For someone so young you have a great deal of truth in your poetry, you must be an old soul. Beautifully done.
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, Rowan
(202) wrote:
Thoughts, feelings, and emotions just waiting to be unleashed. All consuming and destructive. You conveyed chaos very well with your words. The structure is very interesting, even chaotic in its randomness. I like the work. Welcome to DP. I can't wait to see more of your work.
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On Friday, May 7, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
Every line was simply perfect in giving off a chaotic vibe. The imagery was brutal and stunning ,well done. Thanks for sharing.