Phoenix
By Liz
Cleveland
you gotta be
tough
his
mug laughs
surrounded
by family andĀ friends
like bottles
of
vintages and vinegars
brewed
strong and pure
like a good cup of coffee
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Copyright 2010 Liz
Author's Note:
for the chef on his birthdayComments on "Phoenix"
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On Thursday, September 14, 2017, worm
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awesome! come write more...
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On Friday, May 7, 2010, Railway_Butterfly
(354) wrote:
oh this is wonderful.. it's no secret that i'm no good really, at commeting.. but I wanted to make it known that i'd read this and found it beautiful, moving. it's lovely to see you posting. you've bought a smile to an otherwise pretty shoddy day. :) xxx
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A former member wrote:
love the alliterative vintage and vinegar; soemthing old and older.. .. .. and succinct fire of strength and desperation of sorts. .. . excellent personal intimate little poetic.