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Nightfalls
By Gray Vision
Night is coming
And the animals are calling,
The
skies are darkening
And I start trembling,
Light
is fading,
And I start panicking,
With every step
The leaves start rustling,
With every step
I can hear them creeping,
And growling and howling
The fear starts seeping,
Red eyes glimmering
Couldn't
help but start praying,
After some time
I could
hear them retreating,
Overwhelmed and confused
Here
I stayed seated,
Waiting and craving
For morning,
To awaken.
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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2010, A Life Without You
(146)
wrote:
Ha, I was waiting for something to jump out and bite me! Ha Excellent write friend
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Haha, hmm maybe I'll write something pertaining to this comment. Give me some time lol. Thanks for commenting =)
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, Riven Waker
(323) wrote:
you depict an intense scene here - the power of the night and of the wild - this was really brilliant
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
I'm glad you enjoyed this piece Riven and keep writing also, I'll be dropping by soon =)
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A former member wrote:
I could really feel the emotion behind the words. fear, worry.....fantastic, and keep writing.......~S
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
I look forward to sharing more works on here soon, thanks SF =)
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On Monday, May 10, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
Very vivid write my friend, this really exhibits the true power of fear. How it breaks down every mental safeguard, and opens the floodgates to a nightmare world you would've never known existed beforehand, well done.
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A former member wrote:
this was really great you captured paranoia perfectly
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