Free Fall
By Dilated View
I walk through life sleepy eyed
And paralyzed
By an overwhelming
sense
That I'll find comfort while disguised
From the ever
present hint
Of a change that never comes
While cloaked
inside, indifferent
To the rise of my mind's sun
My heart
beats slowly
Like a hibernating lie
That speaks truth I don't
acknowledge
I don't even think to try
If I shrink from living
Does the world realize I'm there
Or has it given up completely
Since I never seem aware
You'll hear no sound
From this
never ending let down
Who always sees what's needed
But
who seems to lack the know how
I have a dollar
If you can
spare some change
Of scenery before I cease
To try to find
my way
At birth arrived
With a pocket full of dreams
And a heart full of hope
That is fraying at the seams
Not unfamiliar with rocky landings
I crash repeatedly
without a clue
That the air cannot withstand me
I walk
through life energized
But terrified
By an overwhelming urgency
To take wing and fly
Time slips through fingers
Like
the crumbs without the treat
And so I nibble without tasting
The design of my defeat
My brain is scattered
Like the answers
that it seeks
Because it doesn't know the questions
So
its outlook's growing bleak
If I give up on caring
Will the
world see I've withdrawn
Or just leave me here, complacent
In a place that knows no dawn
You'll hear no sighs
From
the man in this disguise
Who claims to want direction
But
who stares with vacant eyes
I have a vision
Of a place
where hope is found
Where I'd like to be before death sees
Me planted in the ground
Author's Note:
another on time, these thoughts seem to consume me latelyComments on "Free Fall"
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On Wednesday, May 12, 2010, Shortnlethal
(65) wrote:
lovely depictison!
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A former member wrote:
i found this beautiful, a cascade of thoughts and internal disclosures, while it seems so clear and logical there are undertones of whys and hows, the inexplicables.... which leads to the curiosity for this hopeful vision....
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A former member wrote:
I am impressed by your ability to change style and how you make it flow no matter what direction you choose to take. This was something beautiful. Thank You. =)
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
excellent piece here, tons of imagery, is if it took a walk right through my mind... bravo
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On Saturday, April 17, 2010, Riven Waker
(323) wrote:
the lines "Or just leave me here, complacent / In a place that knows no dawn" really resonated with me somehow - i like the way this piece builds tension and then winds down sort of sadly - brilliant and beautiful
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On Friday, April 16, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
Wow, a great visual piece... sad though.... well done my friend... thanks
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A former member wrote:
Lol that's crazy.
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A former member wrote:
You write so similar to me, it seems we both love the same words...
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A former member wrote:
hope is so delicate; so wanting....your words illuminate that need for hope, and the sometimes tragic self.inflicting act of hoping.........daring..and fitting.
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A former member wrote:
This was an amazing piece Ryan... I think that most of us can identify with your plight. Well written man, thank you for sharing this.