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Abused
By Gray Vision
Abused to the point
Of no return,
Abused
to the point
Of great concern,
Abused to the
point
Your bruises burn,
Abused to the point
To scars they turn,
Abused to the point
Beyond
the abused,
Is there really a place,
Beyond
the abused?
I really don’t know
Just ask the
accused,
Of what it's really like
To be,
In
their shoes.
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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Author's Note:
Feel free to comment or pitch advice, ty for reading this piece.Comments on "Abused"
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A former member wrote:
I could feel the emotions in this as I read it. I loved it.
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On Tuesday, June 21, 2011, Devilish
(2657)
wrote:
I dont know if the cunt mutha fuckers would tell us the truth were they asked so I say burn them at the stake! Watch them leak... Nice write and thank you for your comment
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On Wednesday, June 22, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Oh no problem miss, nice to meet you and for also commenting on my work. It's always nice to see a new face on here anyways, take care =)
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Thanks Wolfy you're so supportive of my works, and your added insight is always welcomed. Thank you for dropping by =)
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On Thursday, May 13, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
However for the abuser, that pain they cause others is a deadly cycle. Eventually they themselves may find their own bodies reduced to bruises and scars, more than likely at the hands of their victims. A great write my friend, depicts abuse really well, thanks.
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