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Missing You
By Gray Vision
Its been some time now
That we haven't seen,
Its
been some time now
You exist only in my dreams.
The longer the wait
The more my love grows,
The longer the wait
The more it takes its tolls.
Days seem like ages
Weeks seem like an eternity,
My walls are crashing down
But you still don’t
understand me.
I love you more now than ever
And that’s a fact,
You know I love you
There's
no hiding that,
All there is left to say
Is that,
I'd like to see you again
Some day.
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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Author's Note:
Feel free to comment or pitch advice, any bit helps, tyvm.Comments on "Missing You"
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A former member wrote:
very pretty poem...sometimes the simpler words are the ones that hit home...this brings back some sad memories of mine...thank you for another inspiring write
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On Friday, January 14, 2011, Gray Vision
(425)
wrote:
Yes, sometimes the simplicity of the words chosen can be much more effective than what was initially intended to begin with. Thank you very much for your time on this peice =)
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A former member wrote:
How true this is for so many people and most won't even at admit it to themselves that they miss the person. Wonderful job
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Thank you Xiled, it's true most simply won't, they may feel this way, but won't take to time to say so I on the other hand, well I'm different =)
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A former member wrote:
Good piece...I could feel the love and longing in it.
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