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Shackled
By Gray Vision
Bound by chain
I have no name,
Shackled
for so long
My body is strained,
I've lost everything
Even pain,
Now so numb
I can't even feel
rain,
Defeated and frail
I'm beginning to turn
Pale,
Now isn't that a shame,
But who's
to say
It's always been this way.
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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Author's Note:
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On Tuesday, June 21, 2011, Devilish
(2658)
wrote:
The names of your work catch my eye... Then read them and know why!!! I like your style and honesty... I also have a thing about bieng shackled...lol
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On Wednesday, June 22, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
You're gonna have to explain that to me, preferably through mail lol, but thank you for dropping by on yet another of my works =)
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A former member wrote:
Great emotive piece. Lyrical rhymes are awesome! I like you ass quote too ahahhaha :P
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On Thursday, February 3, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Haha, oh how we love our new members here on DP, thank you for dropping by I'll definately continue writing as I'm sure will you. I'll drop by in give or take a day or two so you can post, anyways thank you for commenting on this piece =)
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A former member wrote:
"I've lost everything
Even pain" - what a great line. Going beyond the boundaries of what we think pain is. Right into being numb, a place none of us should have to be in. Thank you for sharing. =)
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Thank you very much Killswitch and you keep up the good work yourself, thanks again =)
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A former member wrote:
Forgive me. I was recently touched by a movie called precious...not that you look like her or anything, but your work reminds me of her perspective. Kind of a drama-filled life. Keep writing the pain.
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