Used

By Gray Vision

To be used,
Like a tool,
Everyone thinks that’s cool,
That you’re a mule,
Bound to everything cruel,
But there's no rule,
Pertaining to a mule's
A tool,
Or a tool,
Is a mule
If u wanna know the meaning of cruel
Just ask the mule.

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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Published on Sunday, April 11, 2010.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Feel free to comment or pitch advice, ty.
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  • Devilish On Tuesday, August 16, 2011, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    Boy what a good example to use cause in history and even to date he is a cruelty bare r'... He bares the worst of it... Scholar

  • Gray Vision On Tuesday, August 16, 2011, Gray Vision (425)By person wrote:

    Exactly and you're right on point on that one, it's almost like you write this piece as well with that comment of yours, we've all felt used at one point or another so everyone can relate to this in some way, shape or form. Thank you for dropping by =)

  • A former member wrote: I like this...so bitter. Good write

  • Gray Vision On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision (425)By person wrote:

    I intended for it to be bitter, I mean think of the mule or anyone this piece may pertain to for that matter. Someone who's always the center of a joke or is constantly being picked on. They understand the meaning of the work cruel much better than we ever could. Thanks for the comment Huntress, I'll keep writing =)

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