Impervious
By Gray Vision
Hurt me once
Hurt me twice,
Now impervious
There's no thrice,
I've been scarred
So
much pain
What else is there
To gain?
Surviving the wear and tear
Of here and there
But now there's
Nothing to fear
Hear
Care
Or dare,
But I'm still here
For those who care
To hear what snares I've been
in
I swear.
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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Author's Note:
feel free to comment or pitch advive, any bit helps, ty and have a great day.Awards
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On Thursday, August 18, 2016, Queazenart
(212) wrote:
What a strong, meaningful poem. I hope this took a while to write, because the flow and structure are too good to have been quickly thrown together. Telling me it wasn't would make me so jealous XD
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A former member wrote:
Very much the poetic attitude of a survivor. Someone who has seen too much. Someone who has everything to lose.
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On Thursday, August 18, 2016, 10 Forty Three
(593) wrote:
It's so smooth and to the point. I love it! Write on. - 10:43
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A former member wrote:
A fantastic piece that just flows off the page (screen). A great write and completely worthy of poem of the day.
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On Tuesday, August 16, 2011, Devilish
(2662) wrote:
Everytime i'm lovin it... Got to read more.... I'm glad you spoke to me on chat the other day cause I know your work now and for that i'm thankful. And I apreciate your comments!
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On Wednesday, August 17, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
You really are a sweetheart, despite what everyone else may think I know, I know. I'm just glad that I was furtunate to run into you as well as everyone else here on Dp so thank you all. Take care Dev, I'm sure we'll cross paths again real soon =)
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On Sunday, April 11, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
I really liked the flow, and it's as if this write is mocking and begging for someone to try and hurt you. Knowing full well they can't, genius, thanks for sharing.
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Wolfy it seems like you've done so much in my time off, I have so much reading to do, but I'll be caught up soon enough. Thanks for dropping by =)
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On Wednesday, January 19, 2011, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
Perhaps I've done too much, I hit my limit again lol. Well no rush, it'll be there for anyone to read I guess, and anytime.
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On Sunday, April 11, 2010, HeadpatSlut
(259) wrote:
Very nice, I like the quick pace, and I'm proud to be the first to comment on it, thank for the nice write.
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
I must say I am proud to have taken the time to read the comments also, I've been reading everyone elses works I sort of forgot about my own. Thank you bunches for commenting =)