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Finality
By Gray Vision
What is it like,
Being in a wreck?
What is it like,
Laying face down on deck?
What
is it like,
Taking that last breath?
What is
it like,
Knowing it's almost
Your death?
What
is it like,
Being put to rest?
What is it like,
Knowing it's for,
The best.
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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Published on Wednesday, April 7, 2010.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Feel free to comment or pitch advice, ty.Comments on "Finality"
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On Thursday, April 11, 2013, CharlottesWeb
(511)
wrote:
I turned off my music to read this....that is something. Every line is an answer in it's self that poses another mystery. Interesting.
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, crius42
(7) wrote:
Hmmm? I guess it would all depend on the situation...Who am I? But I do like very much. =)
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Thank you very much =)
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On Wednesday, April 7, 2010, Miztaken4beauty
(177) wrote:
Blessing or a curse?
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
It depends on the situation, take someone who got into an accident for instance opposed to a person who was born with a chronic disease. Think about it and thank you for commenting =)
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On Wednesday, April 7, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
I don't know how it would feel when you take the last breath, but you can always see how it makes others feel. That's what I say anyway, well done.
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Indeed, thanks again for commenting wolfy =)
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A former member wrote:
I've asked myself a few of those questions before. This one made me think a little bit.
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
I'm glad you liked it, thank you =)
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