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The Hold
By Gray Vision
Feel me,
Use me,
Dream me,
Breathe me,
Love me or hate me
No matter
what,
You'll always come running back to me.
I'm
that addiction,
That frustration,
That anticipation,
That vexation.
Try running and you'll see,
The
hold will bring you back to me.
I'll eat you up, spit you
out
Fill you up, break you down,
I'm the boss
of you, not you to me,
I'm the heart to you; you're the blood
to me.
As long as I'm with you, you'll never be free,
Don't
you see, we were meant to be?
I'm bound to you and you to
me
Until its time to dispose of you,
And leave
you be.
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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Author's Note:
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On Monday, November 12, 2012, Dei
(665)
wrote:
perfectly captured this. I know someone much like this. How refreshing a read.
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On Monday, August 15, 2011, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
I wana... Me me me me me... I love it... I'm right here... pick me! You hear me callin, Grey?
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On Monday, August 15, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Oh yes Dev heh, be careful what you ask for it just might come true lol, I thought you'd like it and you're very welcome, I hear you calling so I'll drop by =)
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On Thursday, August 26, 2010, Miztaken4beauty
(177) wrote:
This piece was truly biting. A wake up call.
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On Wednesday, September 1, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Is this a reality for you? I definately hope not but if so I wish you the best of luck in breaking the habit cause you're worth more than any bottle, substance etc. Thank you for commenting and take care =)
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
excellent expression, powerful, your absolutely right on this, it will dispose of you and leave you cold n in the street. unfortunately its always too late when people finally wake up... glad your a shining light in that darkness friend!
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On Monday, July 26, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
I'm trying to shed some light on this issue so that others can take something from it before it's indeed to late, thanks for commenting my friend, you be good now, take care =)
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A former member wrote:
wow! so deep and so real. great write keep writing
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
I wrote this piece on drugs because I hear people say all the time that, "the drug doesn't own them" or "they are in control" you know "I can stop when I want" or "Just one more shot or puff." The truth is that the drug is actually using them, the drug is in control. The drug isn't craving to be used but the person is craving the drug. The drug can wait but the person can't so who's controlling who? See what I'm saying by "Until its time to dispose of you, and leave you be."
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A former member wrote:
Wow. Excellent take on addiction. "I'm the heart to you, you're the blood to me" That can be applied to love, drugs, bad habits, etc. I enjoyed this one.
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