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Agony
By Gray Vision
Slash
Drip, drip
The red starts gushing,
Spewing and spreading
My wrists are weeping.
For all the
times,
I've felt the pain.
For all the times
I've taken
the blame.
For all the times
I haven't complained
For all
those times,
I severed my veins.
This puddle of red,
hides
my shame.
This puddle of red,
Shows my pain,
For I've cried
enough
My tears have been drained,
Thus as my tears,
This
red must be stained
I'm giving up
There's to much sorrow,
I'm giving up
There's no tomorrow
I'm leaving this life,
For it isn't the same
I'm leaving this life,
In search of
a better name.
To a place where there's no more pain,
To a
place where there's no one to blame
To the afterlife, I must not
stray
To the afterlife, there and only there
Can my soul be
sane.
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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
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On Thursday, December 14, 2017, ToxicLove
(39)
wrote:
Slash... drip, drip... the red starts gushing... Spewing and spreading my wrists are weaping... This piece is intense and very deep. I felt your words straight down to my heart! Perfection in words as I can relate more than you know. Thank you for sharing! ~Toxic Love ~
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A former member wrote:
Very nice. I can relate to this agonizing pain. Really captures the emotion in those moments.
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On Thursday, March 22, 2012, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Hey Dravyn, thank you for dropping by, I'm glad you liked it. Keep writing though and take care =)
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On Monday, August 15, 2011, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
I read you before and didn't come back? My bad! This is beautiful... I love your style gotta go read more.....
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On Monday, August 15, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Thank you for dropping by Dev, I'll be sure to return a favor, take care =)
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A former member wrote:
It's weird how one person's words can be used to describe so many different people's pain
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On Sunday, March 27, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
I know what you mean Ash, when you can read someone's work and relate to it in more ways than one. It truely makes the peice that much more stronger. Thank you and everyone else for commenting on this peice, have a great day all =)
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On Saturday, July 3, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
A diversity in styles you have, an excellent write, powerful
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On Monday, June 21, 2010, Wiccad
(125) wrote:
I can feel your pain through the words, emotional and so very real. I am glad I have found you..............write on. Blessed Be )O(
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A former member wrote:
noooooooo....don't leave this life...
come to DP....
hope you felt better after writing this
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